Really Need Some Feedback On My Latest Song

[Notokens]

It was recorded in my home studio almost entirely by myself. I collaborated with another guitarist over the internet. I use Reaper software for recording, mixing, and mastering. Let me know what you think.

The song is called "Woman". Here's the link to reverbnation:

http://www.reverbnat...w/song_13087071

Thanks so much!

 

[Notokens]

http://www.reverbnation.com/play_now/song_13154686

 

[John Watt]

I'm not as much of a reviewer as all my comments might suggest,
mainly because I like to spare the emotions of other musicians from my over-amplified stride.
I worked hard, for me, cutting and pasting this black address so I could listen.
Why?
I got off on the name right away, "Notokens", and how you can riff off that, and it's totally orginal.
You can say it as "note-okens" to accent the word note, and "tokens" can be just a whiff,
or the actual money you use instead of tokens, just to take time with your tokens.
I like the guitar tones, a nice cutting edge without anything retro sounding.
But please, start a band and let the singer sing!