My First Music Forum And Song And Clip :)

[AmirMaor]

Hi,

My name is Amir from Tel-Aviv and I LOVE music!!!!
I'm here to hear your opinion about my music (good and bad) and hope to learn from it.
Here is my new song (and clip), Enjoy

Lyrics:
All she said you and me
All she said meant to be
All she gave me reason to bealive
When she said she will never live


Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now


All she said hold me tiet
When we stay up all night
All she said trust in me
All I have Is what she said to me


Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now


The wind you feel I feel it to
The sky you see Is not just for you
We are on the same road Don't turn your head away
Maybe some day....


Where are you now
What are you doing to me
Where are you now


Tnx

 

[AmirMaor]

How many vies and not one comment

 

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[JHC]

OK It is not my kind of music but I have heard much worse from top artists the video was very professional perhaps others will be more constructive than me. Keep at it

 

[AmirMaor]

Thank you for the honest comment, I think i'll take it as a good comment

Are you talking about the accent that sound weird to you maybe?

tnx again

 

[JHC]

My music is Classical then Jazz then Folk I am not sure what category your music falls into I was thinking pop? btw I do like Klezmer music very much and the accent is fine.

 

[AmirMaor]

OK, Tnx JHC
Next time i'll write Jazz

 

[JHC]

OK, Tnx JHC
Next time i'll write Jazz

You don't write Jazz it is improvised now wait for all the howls of derision and indignation. but you can write a good 12 or 32 bar melody and once learned a musician will improvise on it..............

 

[AmirMaor]

Too complicated for me

Tnx for all comments, it help me allot and I'm working on my accent more