I am still a woman

[onacarom]

I am still a woman

I did not know that to live
I had to die so many times
you were the one that taught me
that you could steal my soul
each time you drank my kisses
and that hell has no door
it just appeared suddenly
in your gaze and in your mouth

you are the god who undid me
and remade me by putting on
a tin heart
like yours

but you can't avoid
that the hole in which it dwells
remember what it is to feel

I'm still a woman
I'm melody
wood to make beams
and chalk to paint windows
in the darkness of a corner

I'm still a woman
full of strength to get out of myself

 

[John Watt]

As seeing myself as the only reply on this entire page, there is some pressure.
What kind of pressure? A difficult kind, when I'm trying to relate to online virginity.
If I'm seeing "I'm still a woman", first on You Tube, and then here at Magle.dk the next day,
is it still the same woman as still a woman, or a different woman from the one I saw before?
Is that enough or should I want more?
Does this make me feel like I'm still a man?
No, I can't say that. I never doubted it.
Maybe I should. I could use a little trans-portation.

 

[onacarom]

As seeing myself as the only reply on this entire page, there is some pressure.
What kind of pressure? A difficult kind, when I'm trying to relate to online virginity.
If I'm seeing "I'm still a woman", first on You Tube, and then here at Magle.dk the next day,
is it still the same woman as still a woman, or a different woman from the one I saw before?
Is that enough or should I want more?
Does this make me feel like I'm still a man?
No, I can't say that. I never doubted it.
Maybe I should. I could use a little trans-portation.

Your comments are always rambling and pointless, we would appreciate it if you do not comment further on our work.

 

[John Watt]

Your comments are always rambling and pointless, we would appreciate it if you do not comment further on our work.

Okay, I see what you're saying, but please, don't criticize me for your own appreciation.
My comments might be font-full, but they're not rambling and pointless.
I used to get paid as a music columnist for local newspapers, confident about my comments.
On You Tube, when you have two or three comments, one of them mine, you don't delete it.
Am I going to say that when you keep playing and changing guitars from video to video,
it's pointless to do that, no, that's your content and obviously you're content with it.
I have always been complimentary about your poetic videos.

If I can't comment any further on your creations I won't watch them,
and I'm going to unsubscribe on You Tube.
Thank you both for the enjoyment you have provided, up to now.