Don't we all " Struggle Like Hell "?

[WillyKuoMusic]

>>> https://soundcloud.com/user-54415704/struggle-like-hell

>>> https://www.youtube.com/watch?v=rXyTnB7mUCw

Verse1:
Wonder where I may end up with no strength whatsoever
It's plain to see that I need love, so get me some or I'll be crazy

Pre-chorus:
Let me, let me skip the pause, I ain't got no time to wait for another chance to come
All they can say it how's it going, new young blood, don't worry 'bout nothing but staying true to yourself

Chorus:
My heart gets a little colder, throat gets a little sorer
No, it's not the time to play dumb, when we all struggle like hell
Struggle like hell, Struggle like hell

Verse2:
Heaven knows that I can't stop, cuz I've been told it's now or never
Oh, pardon me not giving much thought to what could make me seem lazy

Pre-chorus:
Let me, let me skip the pause, I ain't got no time to wait for another chance to come
All they can say it how's it going, new young blood, don't worry 'bout nothing but staying true to yourself

Chorus:
My heart gets a little colder, throat gets a little sorer
No, it's not the time to play dumb, when we all struggle like hell
Struggle like hell, Struggle like hell

Pre-chorus:
Let me, let me skip the pause, I ain't got no time to wait for another chance to come
All they can say it how's it going, new young blood, don't worry 'bout nothing but staying true to yourself

Chorus:
My heart gets a little colder, throat gets a little sorer
No, it's not the time to play dumb, when we all struggle like hell
Struggle like hell, Struggle like hell

 

[John Watt]

Willy! I've been thinking about you and I have a chord progression I'd like you to try.
I would strum this as an up-tempo r'n'b, and have a suggestion for a variation,
that might be very difficult for you to get, but if you do the change is significant.
F#minor, thinking of a few lines or a verse,
and then up two frets into an Aminor formation, being C#minor,
keeping the rhythm going up to Bminor and then up to C#minor.
After doing that a few times I suggest going down to E for a change-up.
Now, if you can only play the three bass strings for those four chords,
for me, it sounds majestic, the strong bass strings up the neck with the ringing open high strings.
You're playing an acoustic, but an electric guitar with effects could really do something with this.
Am I going to suggest words? For sure.
I'm thinking "Whose Child Are You", "are you coming out to play", "who do you want to be today".
oh... oh no... an invasive lyrical update...
How many times do I have to click send, when the anger, my friend, is blowing in the wind,
their anger is blowing all our minds, their anger is blowing up this world.

 

[WillyKuoMusic]

Haha thanks for your review John, always a pleasure, I'll certainly try your recommended chord progression, and don't get angry haha, the world just rolls in its own way, luckily we still got good music to help us roll with it!